Another grammar lesson
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Another grammar lesson
by Guest Wed 17 Jun 2009, 9:49 pm
on the main page "What are we? We are an advance socail network
for artist. We didn't like the way other sites ran there stuff, so we
decided to make our own network."
When it should say
"What are we? We are an advanced social networking site for artists. We didn't like the way the other sites ran things so we made our own network"
for artist. We didn't like the way other sites ran there stuff, so we
decided to make our own network."
When it should say
"What are we? We are an advanced social networking site for artists. We didn't like the way the other sites ran things so we made our own network"
Guest- Guest
Re: Another grammar lesson
by Floyd The Barber Wed 17 Jun 2009, 11:04 pm
Way to sweep the dust and mop the crumbs there Condor. 
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